According to: www.myrevolutionarywar.com/ The American Revolutionary War (1775–1783), also known as the American War of Independence, was a war between the Kingdom of Great Britain and thirteen British colonies on the North American continent (as well as some naval conflict). The war was the culmination of the political American Revolution, whereby the colonists overthrew British rule. In 1775, Revolutionaries seized control of each of the thirteen colonial governments, set up the Second Continental Congress, and formed a Continental Army. The following year, they formally declared their independence as a new nation, the United States of America. From 1778 onward, other European powers would fight on the American side in the war. Meanwhile, Native Americans and African Americans served on both sides.
This looks great, but you've directly copied your facts instead of paraphrasing or using brief direct quotations.
ReplyDeleteAlso, each fact is supposed to using informal citation.
I see only two informal citations: "According to. . . "
ReplyDeleteWhere is your Works Cited List? I can't find it here.